Now lets start with this. Firstable, if you want me to make an opinion for your character, please, put the link in the comments of a FULL REFERENCE
(story, age, name, etc, etc, etc) of the character you want. Im kinda exited to make this xD Dont worry if I dont choose all the characters. I wanna be clearly and not doing all at the same time. I will go little by little and trying to put all the character you are asking to me. Be patience.
If you have any suggestion to me for do another kind of featuring, please tell me. I would be very glad and very glad to do it
Now that I want to be more active here and I have nothing to do xD Besides, it's a nice idea to get closer to my dear watchers
And if you want to tell your friends about this featuring, you are free to do it. Anyway, it would be a nice help to me too and its fun. Its something that I really enjoy. So let do it! >83
Im a little strictic when I do critiques xD So dont be scared or mad with me TnT I just do it for fun x'D
LANCEROT THE UNICORN
's Character I was impressed by looking this character. Simple but original. I dont find a lot of characters that they are... mystics, like a unicorn (or a horse), griffins, goats, deers, etc. The colors are very smooth and sweet to look at him. The eyes are very pacifics but there is a problem with this character. The first time I saw him, I though it was a goat but I didnt see the horn when I read it was a unicorn xD and the tail was a little confused. Unicorn tails (or horses) are furry, like it was a long strand of hair, but I can say for the mystic aspect this character has, the tail its ok The hands could be more hands than hoof. Indeed, I think this character can be confused by a goat. The story is simple, a wish of adventure, rejection and lack of world knowledge. I want to add that the actitude of his character, it looks like a nice person. I love the fact of he needs to be alert to hunters. Yeah, of course, he is weird mobian that needs to defend himself. I love this fact because it makes a good reference of freedom and how danger the world could be in case to dissapear extravagant species. The concept of this character is good, cute and original. Well done with this character
Go watch her >w< She has a nice gallery
ELECT THE HUSKY :bulletred:
I love the clothe designe but the colors of the fur (in a naked way xD) are very common. It looks like it was your fursona(that I read she was your fursona but now she is another character like others of yours). I always love seeing fur inside the ears, it makes a cute detail xD In the other hand, it needs a little work of originality, since its not a fursona. Generally speaking, clothe designe is good, designe of the character is common, but story and all that stuff are very good. She keeps a line of her evolution, that its something I like.
Speaking in a informal way... OMG I LOVE THE CLOTHE! xD
CHRIS THE HEDGEHOG
This character has a simple designe but I like the long tied hair, it makes a sexy detail for him xD Even he is simple, what it makes me intrigated by him, its his speciallity: Medical Genious. While other characters know to fight and have powers, this one is unique, since I dont see a lot of characters having this kind of medical stuff. I can say that there are characters with heal, that is a power, but the fact of being a doctor, its a good detail for his aptitude and an original way to cure others in Sonic fandom (cause I said, people prefer having a character with power, in this case "Heal" than having a doctor that doesnt need power). Talking of his personality, I like him, its a nice and a hard person to act with, since if we do roleplay (Im assuming), we have to play with this character to make him talk. I love that he is a lover of books but I think there are details missing on his story. How he got fasinating with medicine even he was bullied?
Physically simple but psychologically interesing, nice combination
An original character, very sweet and super kawaii xD One problem of her designe is... she needs a official clothe designe. The designe concept is well done. Sheep characters are always cute and all that but I dont see a lot of them as I said in Lancerot critique. Mocha is normal but a really cute character, very innocent and have the desire to be more a girl (It's what I understand in base of her story) She has a good line of the story, and there are facts that makes her personality grows. By the way, I found some elements that make her funny like she loves coffee (I love coffee too ;//A//
. This character is normal for me, not common, normal talking in a good way that she doesnt have super powers or mental powers like the majority and what it makes her special is her personality.
I see her so cute and aww xD
And we finnish here
Dont worry, ok? I will do more of this journals. I ask for 4 because making more than 5 is very tedious and very tired to do since I have to read all the story, and see the details of the character concept.
Have a nice day!Jan-01